Reborn into Naruto World with Tenseigan

I read all chapters even the mtl ones and i have to say this is second best naruto fanfic with wind one being first, first 50 chapters were kinda slow and i wanted to quit few times but after 100 it gets better until around 400 author starts to stall he writes unnecessary chapters but it passes quickly and even though there are quite few chapters that arent needed there arent a lot, fights are bad expect first few where mc is weak all others his enemies have plot armor ones he was as strong as first hokage and went to kill someone at kage level but couldnt and almsot died like what madara was playing with them and mc nothing and there are few more examples of enemies having plot armor and mc doesnt feel like he gets stronger at all even thought technicly he does it doesnt feel like it, plus there are few things that are major to the plot 2 i noticed 5 sand kage was erased? like author forgot and went back and ice dragon thing was forgoten even by obito who was watching like what the end was cut off not like there is no end there is but there could have been few hundred more chapters, i wont spoil but there are few things that arent finished and could have been explored and if author was desperate there could have been war arc that could be 1k chapters if he goes inveting things cause we dont know much about them, i quite liked last few hundred chapters and liked entire idea mc was going for kekai mora and all about it execelent idea, plus his enemies did have plot armor a lot there are few times he should have won but plot armor author doesnt know how to make good fight, i dont watch shonen so my defenition of good fight isnt one which last 5000 chapters but one thats quick and not something that could have been written faster or like most fights in this novel, anyway it wasnt too god but it was 9/10 not perfect and it didnt hook me where i couldnt quit and wanted one more chapter and ended up reading 100 more when i wanted to quit but it deserves 9/10 plus expect wind one other naruto fanfics arent that great i read few and that 3 sss rank talent was good but harem yeah too much but i preservered cause it was good story until 250 sand food thingy, there is one more thing i want to say that being that translator is greedy piece of sh*t he has 300 chapters ahead of free version and pays what 100 dolars for that and his upload is f*ck*d he uploads what once daily most translated novels upload 3 times daily so yeah bad guy but still he is at least trasnlating the novel so he isnt total piece of sh*t. Novel is good there are times where its feels why is this here but most of them are important but its good both as fanfic and as novel.

This used to be one of the best fanfic of Naruto . Honestly I loved it . But from chapter 400 it is hard to read . I have to struggling for 2 months just to read from chapter 400 to 600 . I thought it would become better but it's getting w o r s e . Anyways the 1st 400 chapters were pretty good .

used to love this fanfic at starting but it went into too much detailing that it feels like the real one . mc is one of the strongest but remains lowkey . would recommend for hardcore naruto fans who have watched movies and other side arcs diligently . i found other naruto fanfics more interesting but still waiting for story to progress and keep it updated

my thoughts about the novel: - the book up until around 400th chapter was really great, great concept, nicely written I guess. Really worth reading. The only thing I could have complained about is how MC wasted alot of potential from not using his past memories. - but the book after chapter 400th? It's total garbage not worth reading, basically it was the start of the fanfic's downfall. Author started to prolong useless boring parts, mc suddenly became dumb and irrational like he had lost half of his brain. Villains and enemies started to become brainless too (literally doing the worst decisions they could do). Forcing the plot was also just too noticable and really absurd stuff was happening for no reason. Basically novel just turned 180 degrees. . In conclusion: it's not worth to even start the book, you will be only met with disappointment. Author lost his inspiration already and basically after a certain point in the book the whole story feels dragged and monotone. There is really no reason for it to have 4. 6 rating it has right now, feels like 50% of the people who posted the high ranking here didnt actually read the book. 3. 5/10 for the first 400 chapters I guess

This is my 1st time reading a fanfic about a popular series where I was rlly hooked since almost every other fanfic are not so good. However, after reading this, I can most certainly say that it is the best out of all the fanfics that I have read. In this review, I have 3 things to point out. [1] It's amazing how the author of this novel made it possible for the Mc to have a chance to reach the highest realm with unconventional methods in which it was stated on the story the proccess of how he would be able to reach kekkei mora which would make you think how it actually made sense. [2] the fact that the fillers in the canon was made good use in this story is also amazing especially the one in the land of demons; although sarah and her mom(the filler with the ryuumyaku in it where naruto met teen minato) was never mentioned again after they took refugee in the rain village, especially after the raid against the akatsuki in the land of rain. [3] There are ups and downs in the story which may frustrate you but overall it is a fun read, I rlly enjoyed it with the fact that MC is a scheming b*st*rd and the story portrays the darker side of the sinobi world since naruto is not the focus of the story. Oh, Mc actually replaced the hyuga clansmen disciple of orochimaru in the story.

Probably one the best fanfics I’ve read. The idea is solid and has a lot of potential for a good story. Towards the end (chapter 670+ for me) Hyuga Kuroto weirdly feels likes a character that should have always been in Naruto. Unfortunately I feel like the novel is dragged out as he goes from a genius to an amateur within seconds and starts making stupid decisions likely for the author to add more chapters or keep certain characters alive for plot reasons. Kuroto’s godly ability to gain other characters trust is absolutely ridiculous. It wouldn’t be a problem if they were all easily manipulated characters but Uchiha Itachi is not one of such characters. There is also the addition of Hyuga Yui as Kuroto’s romantic interest. Honestly, there was no romance. We’re told that she’s in love with him and she keeps secrets for him but we’re not told why. In Kuroto’s inner thoughts he says cares about her but he doesn’t really show it. She’s often forgotten and neglected by him. This should have been executed better or completely ripped out of the story in my opinion.

This fanfic honestly got me into Naruto fanfics. It tries its hardest to make everything have a logical conclusion and close all plot ties and it honestly does an amazing job at it. I’ve fallen in love with the main character and his daily interactions with the people around him. This has to be one of my favorite books just because of how unique and well put together this book is.

This is the First fanfic of Naruto that I have already seen, but in my opinion, this fanfic has a good story that come from the beginning until the end with a good interaction between characters. I don't know much about Naruto, but I know enough to understand and try to predict the next step of the story. The main character hasn't changed a lot in his mind since the first chapters, but he evolved in many ways such as his relationships and his powers.

Good fanfic. Characters are faithfully portrayed and act believably. Fights are engaging, and techniques follow the original source quite well. There are some problems due to the author's inexperience, as this is his first novel. Mainly, the issue is that no one from the bad guys ever dies. The author makes it reasonable for them to survive, but that's not the point. Because no one dies, the MC has to face Obito+Nagato for 95% of the novel. The last 5% involves everyone else (Madara, Kaguya, Isshiki, etc. ).

As a fanfiction, it is rather well made. Along with the advantages of fanfics (established worldbuilding, character description and a plotline template already in store), there are a few disadvantages. Some of which you can see in this novel. The dialogue is often-times rigid, however mostly passable. The constructed irony, dramatic and platonic are rather cringe at points. Although the author seems to have a decent amount of skill at making misunderstandings and the associated inner monologue with the misunderstandings. (of course mainly in relation to the mc) Last up to half a chapter. However that doesnt deter me from being more elated when this novel updates compared to the other stuff in my library, because - I Love Worldbuilding. And how the author experiments with all the characters. Oh, disadvantage of fanfics: Some do require one to have read/played the original work. (this does) but hey, Divine Hunter doesnt, check it out.