Custom Made Demon King

Ch. 701 Finished. This novel is what all fanfiction with an OC and many worlds are trying to be. Roy, the protagonist, is a demon from the abyss, a kind of dimensional hub that is sent to many video game worlds containing demons to collect souls. The universes are really well developed and very accurate compared to the original lore. Even as a romance and harem hater, Roy's two wives didn't particularly cause me any problems. Roy is shocked at least once a chapter, which becomes particularly annoying at some point The end. Although it was not rushed or anything, the novel could easily have had 200 or 300 more chapters without becoming repetitive. It's honestly a good novel. I recommend it to anyone who likes fanfiction 4/5

The concept is great, but the grammar is horrific and even near the end of the novel the author keeps adding things in that could have been said at the start of the novel. I definitely think there’s potential but it needs rewriting, there are multiple paragraphs that just explain the same information over and over again throughout the LN.

I thought the story was good overall, but I hated the ending, there was a time when the story was on hiatus, but he then continued with a rushed and horrible ending, but decided to continue the story, and that's fine, but with that ending, I still felt like he ended the story in a hurry, that he just wanted to end it soon, and put that ending, I felt that the story could go further, but the author didn't want to. She's good overall, but I expected more. It ends in chapter 701.

Custom Made Demon King is a decent novel, It has several plot holes and the end of the novel, which was rushed, but it's still well written with an interesting concept of its own. I personally liked the beginning of the first 100-200 chp the most. rating 7. 4

Too many plot holes. The author can't make something without changing it later and can't even make any reason why he just nerf it without any explanation whatsoever like for example, the fusion dance skill can make you go 10x stronger but then the author decided to nerf it without any explanation like he could've just said that the more you use it the weaker the effects are.

I greatly enjoyed reading this novel due to how different it is from everything else. It is a monster evolution litrpg novel, but since the MC is a demon, the story is from the perspective of the invaders. What differs the demons here from in other stories is their ability to invade different worlds (as opposed to having just one human realm w/ a demon realm). The author borrows settings from other works, especially those with demons in them (Bayonetta, Devil May Cry, etc) in a similar fashion to infinite transmigration novels- and I really like how the Author made the many different depictions of demons (and angels) in these different settings fit into one unified setting.

Don't know why people rate this high, but it isn't that good. Most world building is basicly stealing for original IPs and little creativity from the author. From reading and other comments on it, it seems to rarely have a place that is not traced straight to another IP. Just poorly written overall.

Great Novel however I was extremely sad when they stopped translating. The idea was great however I think the author could of done it slot better.

This concept is so innovating, I’m of the opinion that if this was released more recently it would have been blown out of proportion, because the author really gives us a new way of viewing existing concepts and twisting them for the better with a new complexity. Overall great novel and recommend

So far I like this novel, but it isn't deeply written. The mc just goes around different worlds tryna gather souls and get stronger but the whole experience is nonchalant. It would be better if there were allies aiding him, or demon factions that made the stakes higher. It's a fun story for sure, but I want a greater purpose yk